Post by shiningheart on Apr 25, 2013 13:34:09 GMT -5
Brokenstar
| [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign,top] 47 MOONS Tom ShadowCLAN Leader | [atrb=style, width: 296px; padding: 5px; background-color: e3e3e3; border-top: 4px solid #000000;] GENERAL INFORMATION Brokenstar, Broken- for his bent tail, -star because he's a leader BRIEF DESCRIPTION, long-haired dark brown tabby" FAMILY, Great-grandmother: Mother: Yellowfang Foster Mother: Lizardstripe Father: Sisters: Foster sister: Tangleburr Foster brothers: Runningnose, Deerfoot APPEARANCE PERSONALITY Good: Strong, Charismatic, Fearless What use are other cats when he himself is the strongest in the forest? Or so he believes. For a cat who lost five of his lives in battles, Brokenstar is ridiculously confident in his fighting skills. It's strength that he respects, the kind found in rippling muscles and the slash of claws. The only cat he fears can actually beat him in a one-on-one match is Tigerstar, leader of ThunderClan. And so Brokenstar has a grudging respect for the dark brown tabby. Not that he'd ever express it... Whether viewed as a good thing or a bad thing, there's something about Brokenstar that just screams 'listen to me'. He has a way with words that can make anyone agree with his views, whether he's twisting the facts for flat-out lying. He doesn't even need the part of the warrior code that says 'A leader's word is law'. His Clan would listen to him anyway. Brokenstar fears nothing. Not death, not the other Clans, not even StarClan. Some call him foolish, others brave. Really, it's neither of those things. Fear is what lets cats know when they've gone too far. Self-preservation, so to speak. It's not that Brokenstar doesn't let his fear stop him, it's that he actually doesn't feel fear. Bad: Cruel, Uncaring, Vengeful HISTORY Yellowfang started as a warrior. She had such promise to be a legend among the Clans, too. She was a good fighter, a good hunter, and she didn't take flack from anyone! She practically crew up with Raggedstar, ShadowClan's previous leader. He was only two or three moons older than her, and he never let her forget it. They were never enemies, really. The tension between the two was of a different kind, if you know what I mean. They could have been one of the most powerful couples ever to grace the forest. StarClan had a different destiny for Yellowfang, though. They called her to be a medicine cat, and she couldn't take no for an answer. Raggedstar, who at the time was the Clan deputy Raggedpelt, wouldn't let it die though. The two carried on their affair in secret. To Yellowfang's horror, she soon found herself with kits. It wasn't that she didn't like kits, but medicine cats weren't supposed to have mates, let alone children. She didn't know what to do. When she told Raggedpelt, he was ecstatic. He didn't care that they broke the medicine cat code twice over. Yellowfang decided to end it with him and dedicate herself fully to her Clan. When she had the kits, she hid herself in a rotten stump that would hide her scent. She bore three kits: two she-kits and a tom. One of the she-kits was already dead, and the other very close to it. Yellowfang tried to keep her alive, but she died before very long. The only survivor was a dark brown kit, the very image of his father. His face was twisted in hatred, a look Yellowfang had never seen on a newborn. But he burrowed himself into her belly and suckled her milk. She decided that it was her imagination, for how could a kit hold so much rage so soon in his life? Yellowfang was forced to give her son to a queen in the nursery, a bitter and ambitious she-cat named Lizardstripe. Yellowfang gave him the name Brokenkit, after the feeling in her heart of leaving him without her love and warmth. The Clan would assume it was after the permanent kink in his tail. The first thing young Brokenkit would learn: you can't rely on anyone but yourself. He had a nest to sleep in and a she-cat to suckle from, but Lizardstripe made it clear that he was not her son. She encouraged her own kits, Deerkit and Tanglekit and Runningkit, to exclude him and mock him. They were the only kits in the nursery, and so Brokenkit grew up without any friends. The closest he had was Yellowfang, ShadowClan's medicine cat. She seemed to be the only cat in the Clan who held genuine warmth for him, inviting him into her den to help with herbs. He did at first. Perhaps young Brokenkit was hoping that, if he was seen helping the medicine cat, other cats would like him better. When it just seemed to make things worse, he took it out on Yellowfang by telling her to leave him alone and avoiding the medicine den. After that, things got both better and worse. The Clan always seemed to be judging him. Was he strong enough to become a warrior? Did he show any kittypet tendencies? Brokenkit became colder and more distant. OTHER INFORMATON anything else missed in the application that you would like to mention? if not, leave this blank. RP SAMPLE Provide a decent length rp sample (no less than 2-3 paragraphs) showing how you would role play the character. Here, you are trying to show us that you can capture the character's personality, habits, etc. It's one of the most important parts of application, so put some time into this one. ETCETERA OTHER CATS, |
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