Post by selkie on Mar 9, 2013 14:40:58 GMT -5
EMBERSTORM
| [atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign,top] 27 MOONS FEMALE RIVERCLAN WARRIOR | [atrb=style, width: 296px; padding: 5px; background-color: e3e3e3; border-top: 4px solid #000000;] GENERAL INFORMATION NAME, emberkit » emberpaw » emberstorm EXPLANATION, |
BRIEF DESCRIPTION, a pretty tortishell she-cat.
FAMILY, mother: spottedpelt [deceased]
father: blazeheart [deceased]
brother: firepaw [deceased]
mate: leafwhisker [deceased][/div]
APPEARANCE
IMAGE
emberstorm is honestly quite a pretty she-cat. something about her pelt color or the shape or her eyes and face just make her physical appearance fairly attractive. she's rather small in stature, standing shorter than all of the males in riverclan and many of the she-cats. her tail is fairly noticeable about the she-cat - it's extremely fluffy, somewhat contrasting her otherwise short-haired pelt and giving her the appearance of being constantly spooked or angered. her pelt is dappled with orange-and-black patches, with a main area of white covering her belly, paws, and part of her muzzle. her eyes are a deep amber and the fur of her ears sticks out and curls upward.
emberstorm is honestly quite a pretty she-cat. something about her pelt color or the shape or her eyes and face just make her physical appearance fairly attractive. she's rather small in stature, standing shorter than all of the males in riverclan and many of the she-cats. her tail is fairly noticeable about the she-cat - it's extremely fluffy, somewhat contrasting her otherwise short-haired pelt and giving her the appearance of being constantly spooked or angered. her pelt is dappled with orange-and-black patches, with a main area of white covering her belly, paws, and part of her muzzle. her eyes are a deep amber and the fur of her ears sticks out and curls upward.
PERSONALITY
+ clever. articulate. friendly. honourable. fair. independent. reliable. selfless. hardy. ambitious.
the first thing a cat would realize about emberstorm when speaking to her is that she is extremely CLEVER when she wants to be, and is fairly intelligent for a cat her age. she's fairly ARTICULATE and can more or less talk her way out of anything she can get herself into - cats have to learn to take her words with a grain of salt, often finding out the hard way. she's fairly extroverted and FRIENDLY and will try her best in order to be on good terms with the cats she finds tolerable. emberstorm's HONOURABLE and FAIR when judging others, and often has very good decision-making skills - she's never biased in arguments. she's extremely INDEPENDENT and can more than easily handle herself in sticky situations, as emberstorm's had quite a bit of practice operating on her own. RELIABILITY is another one of emberstorm's strengths - if you assign her to a task, even if it's cleaning the elders of ticks, she'll try her best to accomplish it. the she-cat often puts other cats needs in front of her own and is quite SELFLESS in that area.
- cynical. sardonic. critical. irritable. moody. lazy. manipulative. impulsive. troublemaker. spiteful.
emberstorm, like every other cat, is not without weaknesses. she's almost infamous for being CYNICAL and SARDONIC, often complaining 'why do we have to do this? it's so pointless!' and is known to have a tongue as sharp as her claws. she's very CRITICAL of other cats, often second-guessing even a leader's plans. emberstorm almost always appears to be in an IRRITABLE mood and is very vurnerable to wild mood swings - she's as MOODY and unpredictable as a harsh newleaf storm. she's quite LAZY about things she doesn't feel like doing and often attempts to get other cats to do her share of work for her; she's fairly MANIPULATIVE in that regard. IMPULSITIVIY is another one of her weak points - she often acts before thinking when doing something, which as more often than not gotten her into trouble. emberstorm's also somewhat of a TROUBLEMAKER in the clan, often provoking fights when they're not needed and getting herself and her clan in trouble. another thing she's almost infamous for is her grudge-bearing abilities, as she's very SPITEFUL and it's almost impossible to get her to be the bigger person in an argument.
LIKES,
[/font]the first thing a cat would realize about emberstorm when speaking to her is that she is extremely CLEVER when she wants to be, and is fairly intelligent for a cat her age. she's fairly ARTICULATE and can more or less talk her way out of anything she can get herself into - cats have to learn to take her words with a grain of salt, often finding out the hard way. she's fairly extroverted and FRIENDLY and will try her best in order to be on good terms with the cats she finds tolerable. emberstorm's HONOURABLE and FAIR when judging others, and often has very good decision-making skills - she's never biased in arguments. she's extremely INDEPENDENT and can more than easily handle herself in sticky situations, as emberstorm's had quite a bit of practice operating on her own. RELIABILITY is another one of emberstorm's strengths - if you assign her to a task, even if it's cleaning the elders of ticks, she'll try her best to accomplish it. the she-cat often puts other cats needs in front of her own and is quite SELFLESS in that area.
- cynical. sardonic. critical. irritable. moody. lazy. manipulative. impulsive. troublemaker. spiteful.
emberstorm, like every other cat, is not without weaknesses. she's almost infamous for being CYNICAL and SARDONIC, often complaining 'why do we have to do this? it's so pointless!' and is known to have a tongue as sharp as her claws. she's very CRITICAL of other cats, often second-guessing even a leader's plans. emberstorm almost always appears to be in an IRRITABLE mood and is very vurnerable to wild mood swings - she's as MOODY and unpredictable as a harsh newleaf storm. she's quite LAZY about things she doesn't feel like doing and often attempts to get other cats to do her share of work for her; she's fairly MANIPULATIVE in that regard. IMPULSITIVIY is another one of her weak points - she often acts before thinking when doing something, which as more often than not gotten her into trouble. emberstorm's also somewhat of a TROUBLEMAKER in the clan, often provoking fights when they're not needed and getting herself and her clan in trouble. another thing she's almost infamous for is her grudge-bearing abilities, as she's very SPITEFUL and it's almost impossible to get her to be the bigger person in an argument.
LIKES,
♥ battle
♥ patrolling
♥ being in charge
♥ solitude
♥ sunny days
DISLIKES,[/font]
✗ tigerstar
✗ thunderclan and shadowclan
✗ cramped spaces
✗ thunderstorms
✗ fire[/div]
HISTORY
emberstorm's beginnings were a somewhat simple one. she was born in a litter of two to the aging parents of blazeheart and spottedpelt, with her brother, firekit. firekit had taken after his father and emberkit had taken after her mother, respectively. the two had a rather peaceful kithood, getting up to the usual antics that kits do - attempting to sneak out of camp, disturbing the elders, etcetera. whispers and tension had already begun passing around the clan by then, but what did the two kits care? all they wanted to do is become apprentices and emberkit and firekit remained blissfully unaware of the rising tensions in the clans.
at long last, the siblings were apprenticed - firepaw was apprenticed to frogtail, a young tom, and emberpaw to a patient she-cat named ambertail. the two were excellent apprentices, and emberstorm espically excelling at battle practice, beating her mentor in practice after only two training sessions. both of them grew fairly close as they were the only apprentices in the clan at the time. both were fairly mischievous and some cats say that they spent around a third of their time of apprenticeship cleaning the elders of ticks.
however, this peace did not last.
two or three moons into their apprenticeship, firepaw suddenly disappeared from a border patrol. after combing the riverclan territory and the lands behind the clans, the cats of riverclan came upon a gruesome discovery: firepaw, killed with a clean bite to the neck, past clan territories. thunderclan was immediately suspected for the death of the apprentice and tensions grew larger still and it seemed like every cat was waiting for full-out war to break out between the two rival clans. emberpaw was crushed by her brothers and only friend's death but channelled her grief into her apprenticeship, and was given her warrior name after a mere 4 moons of training.
things were alright with the newly-named emberstorm for a few moons, even as riverclan and shadowclan became sudden allies, despite what any sensible-minded cat would think. that was okay. she could handle that. all she wanted was a normal life.
fate had other things in mind.
somewhere along the line, emberstorm fell head-over-heels for a thunderclan she-cat named leafwhisker. the two she-cats, despite the increasing rivalry between their two clans, gradually fell in love with each other and began to meet in secret - once a week, at sunningrocks. they did this for a good five moons, and it was getting to the point where leafwhisker was ready to leave thunderclan for riverclan - she, like emberstorm, hated tigerstar and what he stood for. of course, that would have been too easy.
somehow, tigerstar managed to find out about the two she-cats secret meetings. however, instead of banishing young leafwhisker, he had a crueller idea in mind.
he sent a messager to the riverclan camp, asking emberstorm to come to the border as soon as she pleased. the she-cat was, of course, scared out of her wits, but obliged on the assumption that he would kill her if she did not go along with his plan. when emberstorm arrived to the riverbank that she'd been summoned to, she was greeted by a heart-wrenching site: leafwhisker, her only love, pinned down by a bloodclan rouge. she wanted to throw him off, get beneath him so that leafwhisker didn't have to die, do something to save her mate, but she was powerless as she watched the rouge's quick and precise bite to her mate's throat.
the deed had been done.
the bloodclan rouge told her to go back to camp and never tell a soul about what had happened on that riverbank. of course, how could she, without giving away that she was a traitor? with brokenstar more or less leading the river-shadow alliance, she would more than likely meet the same fate.
so the broken she-cat stumbled back to camp and to her nest, and cried.
it was that day that emberstorm swore vengance upon tigerstar and even brokenstar -- though brokenstar had done nothing outright to her clan, any cat allying themselves with tigerstar was an enemy of hers now --, upon everything the wretched clans stood for, and swore on her life to see tigerstar die with her own eyes.
a grieving she-cat is not a pretty sight.
at long last, the siblings were apprenticed - firepaw was apprenticed to frogtail, a young tom, and emberpaw to a patient she-cat named ambertail. the two were excellent apprentices, and emberstorm espically excelling at battle practice, beating her mentor in practice after only two training sessions. both of them grew fairly close as they were the only apprentices in the clan at the time. both were fairly mischievous and some cats say that they spent around a third of their time of apprenticeship cleaning the elders of ticks.
however, this peace did not last.
two or three moons into their apprenticeship, firepaw suddenly disappeared from a border patrol. after combing the riverclan territory and the lands behind the clans, the cats of riverclan came upon a gruesome discovery: firepaw, killed with a clean bite to the neck, past clan territories. thunderclan was immediately suspected for the death of the apprentice and tensions grew larger still and it seemed like every cat was waiting for full-out war to break out between the two rival clans. emberpaw was crushed by her brothers and only friend's death but channelled her grief into her apprenticeship, and was given her warrior name after a mere 4 moons of training.
things were alright with the newly-named emberstorm for a few moons, even as riverclan and shadowclan became sudden allies, despite what any sensible-minded cat would think. that was okay. she could handle that. all she wanted was a normal life.
fate had other things in mind.
somewhere along the line, emberstorm fell head-over-heels for a thunderclan she-cat named leafwhisker. the two she-cats, despite the increasing rivalry between their two clans, gradually fell in love with each other and began to meet in secret - once a week, at sunningrocks. they did this for a good five moons, and it was getting to the point where leafwhisker was ready to leave thunderclan for riverclan - she, like emberstorm, hated tigerstar and what he stood for. of course, that would have been too easy.
somehow, tigerstar managed to find out about the two she-cats secret meetings. however, instead of banishing young leafwhisker, he had a crueller idea in mind.
he sent a messager to the riverclan camp, asking emberstorm to come to the border as soon as she pleased. the she-cat was, of course, scared out of her wits, but obliged on the assumption that he would kill her if she did not go along with his plan. when emberstorm arrived to the riverbank that she'd been summoned to, she was greeted by a heart-wrenching site: leafwhisker, her only love, pinned down by a bloodclan rouge. she wanted to throw him off, get beneath him so that leafwhisker didn't have to die, do something to save her mate, but she was powerless as she watched the rouge's quick and precise bite to her mate's throat.
the deed had been done.
the bloodclan rouge told her to go back to camp and never tell a soul about what had happened on that riverbank. of course, how could she, without giving away that she was a traitor? with brokenstar more or less leading the river-shadow alliance, she would more than likely meet the same fate.
so the broken she-cat stumbled back to camp and to her nest, and cried.
it was that day that emberstorm swore vengance upon tigerstar and even brokenstar -- though brokenstar had done nothing outright to her clan, any cat allying themselves with tigerstar was an enemy of hers now --, upon everything the wretched clans stood for, and swore on her life to see tigerstar die with her own eyes.
a grieving she-cat is not a pretty sight.
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